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Page 1 by Clara-Lesedi Page 1 by Clara-Lesedi
Oh...
My first comic. Sorry for my bad English and for speech errors.
I hope it to be not very terrible.=)

Let me explain a little on the account of the content of the comic strip. The action takes place not on pride Rog, as far away from him. There is also a long mountain with numerous caves where lived this pride.

Перевод.
Ох...
Мой первый комикс. Простите, за моё плохое знание английского и за речевые ошибки.
Надеюсь он получиться не очень ужасным.=)

Немного поясню на счёт содержания самого комикса. Действия происходят не на Прайд Роге, а далеко от него. Там так же есть длинные горы с множеством пещер в которых и жил этот прайд.
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Adam-Walker Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Writer
At least your English is much better than some people's. Even if you are Russian.
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Clara-Lesedi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the compliment! *Free Icon/Emote* Toothless (Love it!) 
I hope someday I will learn English.
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Mairembe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Мило получается)
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Clara-Lesedi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Спасибки!
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TheRealBlackLion Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh, I love it already :3 I love your style :heart:
If you want I can try and help with the English in the comic? You give me what you think there should be and I correct it? Only a kind offer :3
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Clara-Lesedi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the suggestion! Love 
If you is not too much trouble, I would not have prevented your help with literacy. =)
And tell me please, I've got an error in the text?
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TheRealBlackLion Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I see some mistakes :3

1: Kiburi, are you here?
2: Soon is the coronation of our ...Brother...!
3. Are you not happy about that?

If you want help with other pages too before you upload them, note me!
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Clara-Lesedi Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, thank you =)
I will correct.
Okay, I'll send you the Next page as soon as draw.
You do not mind? =)
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TheRealBlackLion Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
Alright :3
Of course I don't mind! :D I will help as much as I can :3
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Clara-Lesedi Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!=)
 I'm happy!:squee: 
Do you understand me:D (Big Grin) 
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